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Set Me Free
By Midnight Shadow
I walk the roads endlessly,
My wrists and ankles in shackles.
I fall down, tired and weak.
*kick* Get up, you stupid, worthless bitch!
Bruised and beaten, I slowly climb to my feet.
You poke a spear in my side,
Reminding me of your presence.
I look up and see it ahead...
The city at which I'll be sold.
We arrive, I get shoved in a cage.
Crowds pass by, thousands of people staring,
Where is the face of hope now?
Moving now, I am placed to be bid upon.
I see him in the many faces,
His brown eyes gazing up at me with wonder.
We recognize each other right away,
Lovers from a past lifetime.
I hold out my hand to you,
Yet your touch is just out of reach.
The guards see me and laugh.
Then I feel a sharp pain in the back of my head.
My last words before I slump to the floor,
"Set me free my love..."
Darkness...
Did you make the final bid?
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Copyright 2004 Midnight Shadow
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On Monday, September 30, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795)
wrote:
interesting story, loved it :)
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A former member wrote:
This is a great poem, your words are just powerful
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On Tuesday, November 2, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
Another killer work.. and again I am left wanting to know what happens.. excellent work.. not knowing can be mildy agonizing :) -Michael
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A former member wrote:
its so good keep it up k
kyas lil sis britt
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A former member wrote:
amazing work....it reminds me of a book i recentlt finished Night of the Wolf by Alice Borchardt (A.K.A. Anne Rice's sister) in the book two main characters had a relationship very similar to this poem. really good write
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On Monday, June 7, 2004, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
earth beggins to shake* chains beggin to break Lovers from a past lifetime but we cannot touch * feeling so much from this piece beautifull & dazzling like my mother would say* 669 * fucking rocks!
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A former member wrote:
This is so creative...Bravo! *applauds*
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On Wednesday, May 26, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
Oh my gawd! I love this so much! I had to pick up my chin, I love the way you left me hanging..was the bid made?? Wow, who knows? ^_^
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On Wednesday, May 26, 2004, BleedSilver
(298) wrote:
Tracy...this is beautiful...lovers from a past lifetime...such a romantic yet unused topic, and you did well with it.~Mikey
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On Wednesday, May 26, 2004, Malice In Wonderland
(987) wrote:
beautiful i liked it lots kya
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A former member wrote:
WOW...This is so painful...Your words actually made me taste the sadness, and the resurected hope when you saw your love...These ups and downs...Beautiful,simply BEAUTIFUL.Love it: OG
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