Hitting Rock Bottom

By midnights voice

Hitting Rock Bottom



When all life's waters has left you dry
When the cracks come leaving you
asking why

20,000 days have come and gone
leaving you looking
so forlorn

There is no love just tracks of beasts
Just prey and predator
An unending feast

There must be blood spilled before the altar
So wave your hands
to holy martyrs

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Copyright 2017 midnights voice
Published on Wednesday, December 13, 2017.     Filed under: "Graphic Art"
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  • Bornfrompain On Wednesday, December 13, 2017, Bornfrompain (792)By person wrote:

    Dude this was darkly spectacular!!!! - BFP is darkly a word?

  • midnights voice On Wednesday, December 13, 2017, midnights voice (1071)By person wrote:

    See Corinthians 13:12

  • midnights voice On Wednesday, December 13, 2017, midnights voice (1071)By person wrote:

    Thank you Bornfrompain and yes darkly is a word and used as part of titles to some great written works .

  • midnights voice On Wednesday, December 13, 2017, midnights voice (1071)By person wrote:

    Everyone is either prey or predator . 365 days times six decades = 20, 000 plus days

  • A former member wrote: What kind of prey and predator? Who were the Holy Martyrs? They were a different kind than any we have today. They were surely not afraid. Mammoths looked to have once danced in your photo. What is the significance of 20,000 days? Free to not answer any questions as I'm too nosy.

  • midnights voice On Wednesday, December 13, 2017, midnights voice (1071)By person wrote:

    We are the martyrs

  • A former member wrote: Well don't forget the sheep can all have very sharp teeth if they want to. Prey isn't as helpless as they seem to be.

  • midnights voice On Wednesday, December 13, 2017, midnights voice (1071)By person wrote:

    The picture is a lake that dried up revealing the lake bottomm . Those are rocks at the bottom of the lake and the mud has dried up and cracked . As everyone's life must do when our lake of life evaporates .

  • A former member wrote: if we are saved Jesus gives us living water.

  • midnights voice On Wednesday, December 13, 2017, midnights voice (1071)By person wrote:

    So true you are Winters Bone .

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