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By morbiddemonchild
when a life full of pain hits you right in the face
when a storm comes wrecking your place
in this world
it's not always fair how you end up sorry for nothing you did wrong
it was nobodies fault but yours
i knew about it but how could someone like me stop someone like you from
doing what you were determined to?
i had no reason
i had no control
i wanted you here
your life you stole
away from me
away from them
i loved you so
you gave it up and didn't say a word
now you're gone and won't come home
no smile
no face of glee
you stole that from me
and i can't figure out why you would do such a thing
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Copyright 2003 morbiddemonchild
Published on Wednesday, September 24, 2003.
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A former member wrote:
ok, thats it, when i get a favorites list, you are on it, no ifs, ands or buts about it. Everything you have written so far is amazing.
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On Friday, September 26, 2003, SilentStalker
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wrote:
I already have a favorites list...so there you go...welcome... -Darun
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On Friday, September 26, 2003, morbiddemonchild
(33) wrote:
thank you for putting me on your favorite list. i'm flatered.
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On Wednesday, September 24, 2003, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
oh dear don't i relate to the whole "unrequitted love business" but worry not or youll miss out
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On Wednesday, September 24, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
I still cant control myself around poems like this. This one was a gem uncut, and with that sparkle of seeing outside yourself, even when in pain... *sigh* Well as I said, no control... Tiger
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A former member wrote:
What he said. But put an "oh" or "ahh" in there somewhere. Good work.
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On Thursday, September 25, 2003, morbiddemonchild
(33) wrote:
thank you alluring descent. i shall remember that.
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