jupiter

By anaksunamun


















I love the way you ask me random things.



It's two a.m here in madison and I have to be back up in five hours, should I eat now or wait for morning baby ?...the way you kiss me up and down my spine. I feel alive like a womb of wasps making love on my epidural scar . your perfect wrist on my belly gentle like warm singing to the wild blown trees .. and how you love the imprint of my bra across my back when I come home at night.










unable.




















when I don't taste you , I taste salt and sweat and rusty rosary beads, and all my passports are lost and falling through broken drawers , when you aren't here to catch them .



you are softness I am sore.




















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Copyright 2014 anaksunamun
Published on Friday, October 10, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Cassette On Tuesday, January 2, 2018, Cassette (1144)By person wrote:

    "you are softness I am sore" ...every little thing about this, the ache, the tenderness.

  • Phalanx On Saturday, April 11, 2015, Phalanx (679)By person wrote:

    That is a space I can't fill with words although, I noticed. It's damn good.

  • A former member wrote: I love this.... awesome job

  • Magdalena On Saturday, August 2, 2014, Magdalena (614)By person wrote:

    Sensually delicate and tenderness so beautiful and the ache of being out of reach, all felt in this wonderful piece beautiful lady. :)

  • whisperingwalls On Saturday, August 2, 2014, whisperingwalls (219)By person wrote:

    I agree with the previous comment, this is the third work i've read and you are a multi-faceted poet. I enjoy the format with which you convey, and the unique imagery you use to express powerful and gripping emotions. I think I'm becoming a fan :p.

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