"I love the ending. I enjoyed this because of a blunt meter with a satire yet genuine expression. Thank you for sharing. :)" Posted by Jonas Robinson on "A Family of Sorts" by Commander_Cadaver
"I wish we could all go back to those days. I enjoyed this because of the ending metaphor of the canvas for your poem itself. Thank you for sharing. :)" Posted by Jonas Robinson on "Back to How Things Were" by Commander_Cadaver