Comments by sIo
- "to me the first sentence sounds like finding happiness or personal truth in over indulgence...perhaps i'm wrong. i like the wrid all the same. as is every work of yours co written or not...it's a mind bender ;)"
Posted by sIo on "Parrot, Coin toss, Rematch" by Dancing_Monkey
- "from this i get a sense of competetion and maybe sabotage? innocence and perhaps a cold shoulder but remorse at the same time? very hazy but i like it a lot...especially the first sentence..."
Posted by sIo on "Parrot, Coin toss, Rematch" by Dancing_Monkey
- "chimp doggy i'm sowwy but i hafta say i don't get dis at all....i read it like three times though. i tried. but i do like, however, the fact that it is open to question. a straight forward write sometimes can just be cliche"
Posted by sIo on "Gatekeepers Bribe" by Dancing_Monkey
- "the first line, and 'dog of hospice' you always have such prominent thoughts in your poetry. honestly i may not understand the entire thing but i take from it something i never would have being on my own..."
Posted by sIo on "Gold wrapped Memory scorn" by Dancing_Monkey
