Comments by BeautifulCalamity
- "--very nicely written. . "he wondered if i was just another fucker
come to rain on his parade". . some lovely ideas throughout this. .
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Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "two modern boys" by Jonas
- ""and the light fell on him like it would
on a gangster in a prohibition era film". . whoa, I really like this. it's something I know, one of those things you dont really want to admit I suppose. reminds me of several different things all at once, very n"
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "two modern boys" by Jonas
- ""and there's nobody and you wouldn't have it
any other way". . lovely line, this piece is honest reality. . and well damn, it was just great. the way it moves and fits together was amazing as well, you've got talent
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Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "the retracing of steps" by Jonas
