Comments by Rebirth

  • "This is how it should have been, alone. It's a great piece and it should stand by itself. Great write."
    Posted by Rebirth on "Assonance" by GirlintheBox
  • "ok so you want honesty. I think it's too repetitave, but the theme behind the lyrics is great, no better songs than the ones that stick it to someone else. I think maybe you could tweek it a little so not every line starts with "You think""
    Posted by Rebirth on "Whenever I am Gone" by GirlintheBox
  • "The way Assonance just rolls of the tongue is wonderful, you really did well with that one."
    Posted by Rebirth on "You Say" by GirlintheBox
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