Comments by Mute Serenade
- "I agree, sometimes the shortest are the most hard hitting. Fantastic as always, I love the constant intensity of your words... Nothing from you ever feels the slightest bit pedestrian, it all packs a punch. "
Posted by Mute Serenade on "...Fractures" by SolApathy
- "What beautiful sweetness. A lovely ode and a magical write. One of my favorites from you fo sho. "
Posted by Mute Serenade on "...Hues " by SolApathy
- "This is my favorite. Honestly. It's ripe with your style while still feeling like such a departure. I like it's snappy flow as it pounds it's way home. Seriously the best. I love this so hard."
Posted by Mute Serenade on "...Chaotica " by SolApathy
- "YESSSSSSSSS. ALL HAIL YHE MASTER OF CHALLENGES! You forgot to mention that the poem also had to be a love letter to the letter you couldn't utter. A three point challenge that you fucking SLAYED. bravo hazaa and many exclamations!!!!!"
Posted by Mute Serenade on "...Vowels of our bowels " by SolApathy
- "I love it! loooooove it! Your ending punches with the words, not the pause. Down with pause! Anti-pause! Weight of the words brings this to a close in a symphony of chaos. Rounding all the loud vibrant pieces with a tidy little bow. Yay! Crayola pallid dreams. Love it."
Posted by Mute Serenade on "...Medley of Resonance" by SolApathy
- "This resonates with such a sadness... If the Penner is the Penned then let me assure you, you could never disintegrate into the unreal. Ever, ever. Expertly written, as ever and always, friend 😊"
Posted by Mute Serenade on "…Parabolic Introflection " by SolApathy
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