Comments by nightshade

  • "I really like this one but the lupine line and the prowl line are a hair off. Other than that it is excellent and I enjoyed the imagery as well"
    Posted by nightshade on "The Fight" by DarkBlades
  • "When I first started reading this I got a very creepy feeling of deja vu. Especially the line "Now I am forced to walk this dark and gruesome world." You could have pulled this almost directly from some of my unposted works. I however welcomed the sudden change when faith stepped out. I must say you are a writer after my own heart. (even if you seem to steal my lines :p) Keep em coming, Roxas :p (actually you might be Sora he had a bigger bit to play :p)"
    Posted by nightshade on "Finding Faith" by DarkBlades
  • "Interesting choice there two separate ways to go. It's sad that so many scream yet none take the time to hear. However joining the land is always a rather tasteless option."
    Posted by nightshade on "sweet suicide" by DarkBlades
  • "I like the advice given in this poem but some many choose not to take it or are simply unable or to scared to do what is best for them. Nice write"
    Posted by nightshade on "Abuse" by DarkBlades
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