sweet suicide

By DarkBlades

I will drink this poisen to put me to sleep,
From my mouth there will be no peep,
No one will even notice im gone,
Even if i leave my body on the lawn,
But before I drink I cut my wrists,
To fill myself with heavenly bliss,
My life is cursed I've lost my dreams,
Can no one hear my bloody screams?
I sit down with the poisen in hand,
Drink it and let my bloody body join the land.

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Published on Monday, October 25, 2010. Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"

Comments on "sweet suicide"

A former member wrote: Really beautiful.
On Monday, January 10, 2011, SulaMoon (67) wrote:

Sweet sorrowful suicide.....so many options, so little time to do them all before one bleeds out. Love your work.
On Monday, January 31, 2011, DarkBlades (12) wrote:

thank you i appreaciate it
A former member wrote: i really like this one i have to agree with painy here it is deep and full of emotions
A former member wrote: emotions are so deep its like an abyss that never ends
On Monday, November 1, 2010, nightshade (118) wrote:

Interesting choice there two separate ways to go. It's sad that so many scream yet none take the time to hear. However joining the land is always a rather tasteless option.
On Monday, November 1, 2010, Ladyhawke (393) wrote:

I agree with painedpoet.this is amazing! the emotions and feeling inside the meaning of this are. . . deep. keep it up;)
A former member wrote: wow i can really feel the emotions from this one its really deep