The Fight

By DarkBlades

First we met eye to eye,
I attacked after a quick sigh,
My first punch hit him in the nose,
With the smell of blood and the crack of bones,
The second hit a knee to the gut,
He keeled over with a "FUH!"
The third i flipped him on his back,
Then stomped his ribs that made a loud crack,
Then the moon hit me all was fine,
That was when i started turning to a lupine,
I fell to all fours and my body grew fur,
My teeth turned to fangs and i let out a raged growl,
With being a wolf with eyes that could kill,
He tried to run but i caught up with a prowl,
I tackled him down and ripped him apart,
I mangled him til i stopped the beating of his heart.

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Copyright 2010 DarkBlades
Published on Monday, November 8, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: wolves fight well

  • nightshade On Wednesday, November 10, 2010, nightshade (118)By person wrote:

    I really like this one but the lupine line and the prowl line are a hair off. Other than that it is excellent and I enjoyed the imagery as well

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