Comments by flying_fox

  • "awwww too cute. A lovely flow, though I'm torn with "i long to taste your chocolate eyes"... a beautiful description, but I can't help thinking 'ewwww, licking eyes!'. If you've ever done this by accident, you'll know what I mean. :) Fox "
    Posted by flying_fox on "rainbow socks with the individual toes" by theBAC
  • "a very sad write... some wonderful turns of phrase, I especially like the last 5 lines in the first stanza. Fox"
    Posted by flying_fox on "slunt" by theBAC
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