Comments by purr_verse

  • "biting cold mechanical harsh and yet subsuming... lovely formatting too... indeed, lovely 'landscapery'... "
    Posted by purr_verse on "UNDETEST" by ariadne
  • "the four closing lines of verse 3 are just magicmarvellous... and 'dis-gust'... i still think that rocks...dancin', dancin'..."
    Posted by purr_verse on "TRY" by ariadne
  • "aaaahhhh!! now this one is new to me; "she speaks plainly and mirror glitch" why yes indeed... pra(e)y for leviathan... "drip dystrophy along anxiety"; "lipgloss and algebraic bathwash"...so/too/many/more! immerse, immerse...and...purr..."
    Posted by purr_verse on "HER PLAIN" by ariadne
  • "that opening line just kills me... in the good way, of course! brilliant. (i find myself picturing it in your handwriting! two together.) purr"
    Posted by purr_verse on "STANCHION" by ariadne
  • "like drowning in dali (and 'parallel')...see and see and see again...in lunar/sees... purr"
    Posted by purr_verse on "EASY" by ariadne
  • "yay! *dance* you're here, you're here...and as such any comment i leave is going to look horribly biased... but that does not change the fact i think your worldwords are magnificent. :) purr"
    Posted by purr_verse on "TONGUE DIVIDE" by ariadne
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