…..AND DREAMLIKE
By ariadne
syncopation is neat and dressed like cabaret, deplete and summoned
sortiledge, outgoing rewind and death horse taped to inn.
decision.
and satisfied, this tightly wound erosion of tele-movement disguising
and drum roll, like awal dagaz and drinking games, guessing
at whats for tea.
like initial and predatory, this gaze.
once upon a like of talk stole, mesmeric and tapestried,
wincing bets of non-dominion and perpendictal
talismanic.
a fright is guessed at, denied, fallen along, a
seeping Socrates of legend like must, and hesitant later
on.
in this tele-motion disguise.
evinced of consolation,
lakers skyclad and humming amidst Trojan,
verbose background and arching lace divan- a similitude of slighter rust,
up close and glittering in haze, rain like a cement, causing
the scene. Delay isn’t likely to reheat, blossoms folding
if there’s sun in want over there….
A dressing-gown fence collared silky-clean wisp,
momentum umbra….fellatio black.
running. seeking sense of gone before, tilted whisper
tasks within, in between
comes about.
hassle serves.
AA301103
Comments on "…..AND DREAMLIKE"
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A former member wrote:
'like initial and predatory, this gaze.' Like reading a twisted origami paradox of chaos& magick fluxuated deep& deeply profound; beautifully unreal[surreal]: 'momentum umbra….fellatio black.' shadow words glittering mesmeric& manisfested, 'seeking sens
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A former member wrote:
[bloody limitations!] 'seeking sense of gone before.' this is an amazing line tilting the poem like a soft whisper scribbled from ghosts moaning...
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On Wednesday, June 23, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
like fractals within mirrors and beyond; some clear, some splintered... i always love the motion in your lunar.see... :)
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A former member wrote:
beautifully said, purr...a comment of poetical nature.