TRY
By ariadne
cadence of tape measure, drapng mesmeric test
sin capacitator carniverous, a direction benefit
with lighting and subordinance, detested figurine
wreathed remain
feigned dissonance and testimony, regards all pain and
send
a corpse twined frequency, a migration of tapestry
tall hence around what was then
and in turning verges
and reciprocal guises
a road smirks being when
insistence on a weaponry - insistence on a raze
type obvious of onusidal re-crop
my huntsman tortured maim!
look out!
and one
this dis-gust of wind
trapezes mosy-like and tenebrum
a sharp sold taut and read
in vision
and memory?
perhaps telepathy?
mayhaps rend
a deluge taste and mockery, a pented rasping relent, a toothless
verbal crockery shut forth of all to cook. i make a mark and taste it,
i
dream emphasise
and less
i stocking feet the tributary, i second on the clock
i detriment the testimony
i euthanise the clock
i paraphrase the circuitry
i, apparently, am not.
this pirouette of sabbatical debt seethes
of manacled title wrench
and masturbates to saprophyte, that shard of crystal death.
teleology defibrillates, the sound of flashtime reverse
intimacy with hypocrosy heralds top fight uni verse
and middle in, the very thing, the backwards of the see
vehement, and hall of guess and jewellery past symmetry
this regional tone tires comfort
loan and conspicuously
halts.
Comments on "TRY"
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On Wednesday, March 10, 2004, flying_fox
(571) wrote:
this one is captivating... I especially love the power of "i detriment the testimony i euthanise the clock i paraphrase the circuitry i, apparently, am not." the use of 'apparently' is just perfect. And love the ending too. Fox
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On Wednesday, March 10, 2004, flying_fox
(571) wrote:
and shit Just realised I said exactly what purr did. Nevermind, we have good taste. :) Fox
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On Saturday, March 6, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
the four closing lines of verse 3 are just magicmarvellous... and 'dis-gust'... i still think that rocks...dancin', dancin'...