"wow - the change in emotion through each of the stanzas is excellently achieved; the use of the colour making it even more so. fine work indeed. :)" Posted by purr_verse on "Ashy existence of a poor man" by Mistress Morbid
"lovely visual emphasis; added extra action and evocation... I agree with Lynaes. great work. :)" Posted by purr_verse on "Body Rot" by Mistress Morbid
"i really enjoyed this (if 'enjoyed is the right term) ..i could picture the whole thing easily, and i like the theme of it too. :)" Posted by purr_verse on "Flow" by Mistress Morbid
