Comments by All Members
- "Correct me if I'm wrong, but the way I interpreted that was the girl was "flawless" and would not associate with "lesser people," until someone showed her how the real world worked, in which case she became destructive, and angry.
If that's correct, I really enjoyed the work. And I agree with the others on here, that line was intense!"
Posted by Unknown on "Pitch Black Existence" by cemetarydance
- "I believe we share a wish... i felt this one through and through... loneliness really does feel like the end..."
Posted by Unknown on "under oath" by cemetarydance
- "Perhaps this feeling of "writer's block" is just a symptom of a much deeper feeling of emptiness. Whenever there's deep depression, a lot of people become lethargic, or physically and mentally inactive. Perhaps what you should try to do is enjoy your day, and then get back to the work. By then, you will be sure to find something to write about."
Posted by KuroiBara on "Just a thought" by cemetarydance
- "'You are starting to become another division of my self loathing' I love it. I've looked for this phrase to say in so many of my poems, but I couldn't find them. Thanks for breathing what I feel. =) Beautiful."
Posted by Err0r on "Antipathy" by cemetarydance
- "man.... i wanted to keep going and reading this.. it just reminds me so much of my past realationships its scary.. good work though"
Posted by mywristshurt on "Brokenhearted" by cemetarydance
- "Wow, incredibly nice work cemetarydance. I completely understand the begining of having no desires despite taking forth actions. The maggots part made my stomach churn, so goal achieved with translating your disgust. Impressive =)"
Posted by Christopher7xii on "Drowning in sorrow" by cemetarydance
