Comments by CharlottesWeb
- "To the point of breaking...and back. Yeah, I agree...this is beautiful. Reminds me of a song also. Would be pretty as a song. You made me ache for some kind of break..."
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "The Rains" by GothicBlack
- "Amazing indeed! Pain, pain and more pain. I get a sense that this poem does not even come close to describing that pain too. Beautiful work though...your poetry is constantly evolving and growing. :::hugs:::"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Goodnight Prayer" by GothicBlack
- "Ooo that last line was a suprise! And it gave the whole thing this twist that should have been seen coming from the beginning but wasn't! Ooo, great writting! When begins to rise, clarity bubbles and chaos begins. I see this. ~JMDW~"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "I’d Rather Not, I’d Rather Dream" by GothicBlack
- "It's always about blood...always...blood gives life blood takes life. Wonderful again. I like the splattering of concepts that at first seem to have no meaning to one another but come together and support the whole so well. Tricky to do, but you pulled it"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Chaotic Meditations" by GothicBlack
