"...yeah, fun cruisin in that muscle Mustang. strong description of rockin insanely in the car, I see crazies in traffic doin that all the time, where the hell are we??" Posted by FadedBlues on "Me, Hendrix, Gloria and You" by Sean Mc Shane
"...nice, a king & a joker residing in the same man makes for some tempestuous nights...very well crafted, which is an easy trick for you... " Posted by FadedBlues on "Queen Card Death Trick" by Sean Mc Shane
"..heavy rap, nice rhyme combos...yeah, I like the 'if you're not confused' line... " Posted by FadedBlues on "Couch Nap" by Sean Mc Shane
"...the rest of the poem is good, but that final line, 'oasis' breaking slightly w/the primary rhyme was an excellent maneuver..." Posted by FadedBlues on "Memory Lane" by Sean Mc Shane
"...speaking of movies, this brings to mind Robert Mitchum, "Thunder Road"... " Posted by FadedBlues on "Last Run" by Sean Mc Shane
