Comments by sTr8-jAcKeT

  • "I like the possible constant conflict & struggle of being in a relationship at least that's what I perceive from this and the episodic installments were a nice touch. Keep up the heart writes J-man."
    Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "A game of chess, no less" by Jonas Robinson
  • "Jonas my man! This is Art and I am thoroughly impressed. This completely enthralls the reader to question every point, every word, every purpose of anything that is ever said or done in Life or a relationship. Why would someone put forth such an effort to woo and cherish, only to leave a devastating wake across your soul? Why would they convey, convince and try to fool us into believing they will be there through that storm only to leave a peering off the docks into the abyss forevermore? This had such depth and content, thank you for sharing this piece of you and all of us. "
    Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "Wonders of" by Jonas Robinson
  • "K... Hey sTr8, we have to go the store today; don't forget milk, eggs, potatoes & dog fud (that's how dogs spell it.) There, left myself a message. On a serious note, this is probably my favorite piece of yours so far brother. Idk why the spiders image is so awesome in my head from this: runic glowing tattoo-like tribal lines going up it's legs & joining on the body. That's what I get from this, thanks my man. Loved theis poem, keep it up. "
    Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "Please untie me" by Jonas Robinson
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