Comments by stryder
- "ere lad; where's me bloody meat & tato pie like; chuffing nora and then some!!!!"
Posted by stryder on "Hope" by carlosjackal
- "sublime...reading this made me yearn as a ghost; of all the things I might miss when I'm longer here....such sorrow and emptiness, and yet the alliterative aspects of the words kept throwing my mind mind back to one place; one window overlooking the sea; remembering the sounds, the sights...what things taste like. Serious poetry aplomb.....edenscancer; please come back and share more poetry; you are a stellar writer, stop lumbering on the periphery; get back here and immerse....have always loved your poetry efforts. Be well......."
Posted by stryder on "Poltergeists (A rant on Sex and reality)" by edenscancer
- "dark, brooding and menacing....to go into the depths beyond 'everything'...in the 'broiling hatred', this was seething madness; at the core of some blackened planet...the magma and tectonics...the volcanic rasp of your words and malice erupting...like a plague, an Armageddon to come...there's an almost paganistic tone to this; strident and fierce....words dripping from the fiery chasms of your ruptured brain....totally wicked!"
Posted by stryder on "Apollyon" by Kurashu
- "lmao....oh my god man - just what I needed this morning; a fat Ricky Martin popping away to his one hit wonder moment of fame!! The irony and the sense of parody...and the bathos were spot on; this gave me a ton of laughs.......you're the perfect antidote to all that self-important depressive (and usually completely crap and cliched) attempt at 'darkness'....this was a wild ride into the failures of fame; clinging to that one moment that might make them a 'somebody' again; yet the years have caught them up and they're in no way fit to be on that stage......cringe-inducing hilarity; loved how refreshing and funny a concept this one is.....kudos for your versatility :D"
Posted by stryder on "Fat men in the rain--Drinkin' my cafe mocha" by Malcholm Dark
- "hole-E shit...the 'ALBATROSS' lands!!!! *Turn off your bloody caps!*....it's been tooooooooooooooo long (bit like my boring comments); you 've made me wait.....and wait...and *SNORES*....and now I am awake!!! You're actually a great haiku writer, this was c-c-c-cold; and quite packed. Even. And for me I like how the no sense could easily be *drum roll please*..."nonsense". Maybe? As though...space honours nonsense....a single snowflake that can snow in the house of gods....bloody big snowflake if you ask me! And I like how that 'sense' of heaven is perhaps cold, is perhaps a metaphor for some sort of inaccessibility.....yeah, 17 syllables of very resonating force, what a picture you paint....what vivacious structure you untangle. And thank diddly fuck...amen! To a post....I consider this a warm up; there's no going back now.....more please!!!! Bravo....** claps away**"
Posted by stryder on "Coldpacked Pantheon" by ALBATROSS
- "you really do the rhyming style very well, you give it a relevant contemporary spin which is enjoyable and refreshing; and in my opinion that's no mean feat...I liked the cyborgy feel of this, given the age of Techno; of the net and cyberspace etc, this poem really fits in with current and social commentry as well as having a Fantasy/Fictional, almost "I, Robot" like theme....thought from strat to finish this was just a real treat for the eyes and ears. Great work....brilliantly rhymed and put together! "
Posted by stryder on "The Ilumination" by Malcholm Dark
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