Comments by TropicalSnowstorm
- "Lovely word use, etc...but the subject matter fills me with sadness somehow. Much of the "reality" we live in can actually be of our own creation. Anyway, lovely flow and your personality shines through, as always. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "the negotiation of my heartbeats" by KittyStryker
- "That is a very beautiful piece! From the first lines "kiss me like a saxophone solo
i want to taste the rhythm long ago
sent down" and throughout. VERY cool and full of a liquid rhythm. Ciao, T/S "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "melt" by KittyStryker
- "Great piece as usual - I like the lines "love offers a way
of concealing bodily imperfections
sunburns don't show
when you have rose tinted
shades", "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "imperfect" by KittyStryker
- "Very beautiful piece! I love the beginning with the cup of chamomile...the poem felt warm like that rolling down my mind. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "greenery" by KittyStryker