Comments by TropicalSnowstorm
- "I really like this one, the closing stanza is especially well worded, "I am alive
a glorious feast, i know;
at risk of saying I do my best..." Really great job! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "sterile I try" by Jessica Orr
- "Wow, what a great piece! I love the imagery and the broken, disjointed style with the "tick" inserted, which gave it the feel of a camera jerking between scenes and emotions and memories. Great job with this one! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Pasture lands" by Jessica Orr
