Comments by TropicalSnowstorm

  • "This is at once sad and beautiful, and I can feel the piece of you that this took to write...that piece gives this life and I can hear the flowing waters as I read it. Ciao, T/S"
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Her River Bends" by Silver Spectre
  • "This is a wonderful piece! The truth and untruth personified by seasons that can never truly meet is a stroke of intellect I found particularly interesting. I also love the final line of your description of the origin of these thoughts... “And God gives Untruths and truths Just in case there is still truth and a lie……And I met this Girl……”. Very nice! Ciao, T/S"
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "I never knew Summer" by Silver Spectre
  • "Excellent! Wonderful flow and feel to this piece, leaving me with an aire of mystery. I love your ending - "how you adored what you could not hold For that I will always remember your love And that which I thought you were but was not true"..."
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "What she was and would never be" by Silver Spectre
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