Comments by TropicalSnowstorm
- "I liked this piece and the imagery you used. I particularly liked the lines "A sign of the times read from calloused palms
If scars told stories would it be horror they write
Or inspiration, what they learned from the fight". The idea of reading the story from the calloused palm is interesting! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Words in Dirty Hands" by Alchemist
- ""We have viewed the sub-atomic
And glimpsed planets like our own
But we can't stop fighting" - love these lines. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Space Age" by Alchemist
- "Very cool imagery and flow to this piece! The start-up with the lines "Mojo, my eight legged friend
Weaves consciousness in" made me think of Anansi stories, with the trickster spider weaving away behind the scenes. There are many great lines in here, but "illuminati over science" was especially a cool way to phrase that point. Loved it! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Eclectic in an Electric Age" by Alchemist
