Comments by TropicalSnowstorm
- "I like the internal rhyme pattern and enjambment in this one. The imagery is strong at jarring as it kicks off and functions to me like a finger snap so that you have me paying attention to your observations that follow. Great job! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Fade" by ColorMeToxic
- "This is a beautiful piece, I particularly loved the notion of watering gardens with their tears and casting their hurt into the ocean where they will be "unable to hurt another living soul." Wonderful! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "To You, Random Stranger" by ColorMeToxic