Comments by Rowan
- "I liked how you described each deadly sin and placed an example with it. This was a nice write. I liked the repetition also. I feel this way sometimes with my boyfriend. He calls me his angel and I don't feel like such..."
Posted by Rowan on "I am not your angel" by Dreamzz
- "haha wow. It really does look like you're free. What a wonderful write. I know some people I wish would die. They're so self-centered and rude to anything and everyone. They talk about people behind their backs something that I just can't stand in a person. If you're going to talk about someone say it to their face and don't be a coward about it. I tell this to all my friends that say things about people. Well I shouldn't say friends. Those are really aquaintances. Nice write. "
Posted by Rowan on "She's Dead" by Dreamzz
- "The visuals were stunning. I saw the scene of the fire in my mind as you painted it there. It seemed so tragic. It seemed like you were taking a journey through hell, trudging on to finally reach salvation. Was the salvation only found in death? If so..then was the journey of life considered one's hell? Hmm very intriguing. I feel as though there's something more to this..write on."
Posted by Rowan on "The End" by Dreamzz
- "This was a nice write. Wanting to be seen as the lover and not the friend. It's so sad to see that. I wrote something with a similar feel to is called "Glass". It was the same concept as this. I bet there are people that actually have this happen to them in real life. I can only imagine what they feel when they see they can never be with that person. I bet it feels like they are losing their soul..."
Posted by Rowan on "Almost perfect wedding" by Dreamzz
- "This sounds so strangled. Like your mind just can't make the decision; the list of cons goes on and on. I like the internal struggle. Write on."
Posted by Rowan on "Maybe I do believe" by Dreamzz
- "Short and sweet. A powerful write for such a simple poem . Thank you. Keep writing. :)"
Posted by Rowan on "Never again..." by Dreamzz
