Comments by Dilated View
- "This felt seedy in a way that made my skin crawl. That type of environment is sadly sustainable though with massive internal collapse, but who will it bring down and destroy in the process? A wicked cycle and interesting read."
Posted by Dilated View on "State Of Disgrace" by Malcholm Dark
- "For a lot of my friends it equates to productivity. Being a dope is a state of mind that can be enhanced but it isn't so for all who partake. A solid list here and interesting perspective."
Posted by Dilated View on "I Am Dazed And Confused" by Malcholm Dark
- "A powerful and haunting work to read. Great flow and visuals used throughout. I could feel the sting and the heat and the blistering skin, you took me right to the moment. Think "dawing" should be "dawning". This felt very lyrical to me. Nicely written."
Posted by Dilated View on "I Have Become Death, Destroyer Of Worlds" by Malcholm Dark
- "Especially enjoyed the structure of the second stanza. I could read this as a metaphor for the individual in general, machine or human really. Any meaning seeking creature. Interesting piece."
Posted by Dilated View on "I, Robot" by Malcholm Dark
- "I found this to be refreshing. I feel like the fool in my circles, generally speaking. Though in reality I would say it's all about perspective. I think most everyone else is the fool. *shrug* Enjoyable read :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "The Mad Hatters' Society" by Malcholm Dark
- "Excellent flow throughout. I understand what it's like to be a prisoner in your own mind to block out other things which might cause worse pains but it still is a lonely way to exist. Nicely written."
Posted by Dilated View on "I Am Withdrawn" by Malcholm Dark
