Comments by Dilated View
- "Damn man this was chaotic I felt like I walked into the middle of a back alley brawl while trying to take a stroll on your memory lane. Fantastic visuals you wove throughout. Very well done."
Posted by Dilated View on "Salvo." by Aleas
- "This tugged me along as though I was helpless to its will. A beautifully crushing piece and I can appreciate the sentiment throughout. You have a wonderful way with words. *tips hat*"
Posted by Dilated View on "Alt / red." by Aleas
- "Beautiful and crushing. The second to last stanza really blew me away, very much enjoyed your word usage throughout. Excellent read, thank you for sharing."
Posted by Dilated View on "Please; Don't." by Aleas
- "This ripped me apart on the molecular level. Has a very frozen in time feel to it and seems like a nice place to get lost in. But like you said in the last two lines.. well you know. Nicely done."
Posted by Dilated View on "Begging; Still." by Aleas
- "Excellent flow and excellent content. I enjoyed following your thought process and how it built up a nervousness that at the end was shattered with a simple question. Very nicely done."
Posted by Dilated View on "Along the Way." by Aleas
