Comments by disposable
- "i like the second half best but the whole thing has impact. poetry doesnt have to be long or have a certain format. give yourself credit for the fact that you have a talent for creating strong feeling and thought with the least amount of words. thats what makes you amazing! even in person, u do this miracle with just your mere presence. i pray you never become self aware. :0) "
Posted by disposable on "Love Through Negativity" by HonestMistake
- ":0) when are you going to realize your genius? just remember us little ppl when u do."
Posted by disposable on "Life" by HonestMistake
- "i like your simplified format. only suggestion i would make is that your poem shows a progression, a transition. so i think it would be awesome if your title reflected that. everything u do is amazing. love you sugarbritches!"
Posted by disposable on "Hate" by HonestMistake
- "i love your use of all things gritty. toxic, parasitic, scattered....your choice of words set a great feel for this one. evrything you do is amazing. just ask wicked ;0)"
Posted by disposable on "Transpire" by HonestMistake
