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Comments by Echoes of Orpheus

"I feel the repetition of "now" in those first two lines wasn't really necessary but this is a great little piece yet again. Plays great with the visuals with that third last line."
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "Six Sceptres Glowing In the Gloam - or - A Gert Attercop" by Riven Waker

"A modest amount of alliteration throughout, it just worked for me. "
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "Apostles of Darkness" by Riven Waker

"Right on the limit of being too heavy with the words in such a small space, but sometimes being right on the limit is the pinnacle of a poems potential, as in this case. I enjoyed it, write on."
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "Fey Wee Wyrm Upon Blackheart Branch" by Riven Waker

"There are very few authors I actually enjoy the truly dark pieces such as this from, two poems written thus far and I can already add you to that list. Great work, great imagery and diction. Welcome to DP and write on."
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "Apostles of Darkness" by Riven Waker

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