Comments by Echoes of Orpheus
- "My god... I would list the extents to which I hate that man, but you still feel for him. It seems the strength of love can be proven just as strongly through its death. (on one side at least) The way you said this was far beyond anything I wrote in my time in this position... I loved the way it broke my heart. This speaks to me in too many ways to not favorite it, write on."
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "Why I stole your heart" by Lylani
- "I love writes that really put things into perspective, the sides of the stories we never knew and made assumptions about, we've all done it at some point. And a happy ending too, that is the best kind of mom. Write on"
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "The Arrogance of Strangers" by Lylani
- "other than "sky's" should be "skies" I really enjoyed this. And take that as a compliment because I usually stray away from pieces with the generic rhyme schemes, but this was well done."
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "Monologue of a Muse" by Lylani
- "And I think expressing it is the only option. It's the ever classic scenario of "I could reveal it and maybe it works or maybe I'll regret it - or I'll regret every second I haven't revealed it if I don't, anyways""
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "Its not quite love" by Lylani
- "Wow, I did not expect that last line at all... pictured it as the husband. It went from beautifully romantic to crushingly painful with one line... Well written"
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "Wedding day blues" by Lylani
