Comments by HattoriHanzo
- "thx for you comments. im not as violent as i write, in fact im extremely passive and non-violent, but i have fun writing subject matter that sort of boils up from an alter-ego :-)"
Posted by HattoriHanzo on "Bleed the Whore" by HattoriHanzo
- "thank you Mylissa. i dont feel that i conveyed the 'contradiction' part very well in this poem, but i know that my conflicting feelings are part of my life. im sure many people can relate to having those such feelings."
Posted by HattoriHanzo on "Beautiful Contradiction" by HattoriHanzo
- "thx Insanity. the # of syllables are uniformed but for sum reason i think the last stanza soundz shOrt and weird. o well, sumtimes syllable soundZ can B deceiving i think."
Posted by HattoriHanzo on "The Predator" by HattoriHanzo
- "...on the other hand this isnt a farce cuz my writing TRULY cums from me. i like your comment Zane- but im not THAT bad :-)"
Posted by HattoriHanzo on "The Predator" by HattoriHanzo
- "thx for the comments. if its disturbing and you DONT like it than i think thats still ok. some of the thingz i write, im drawing from my own feelings and amplifying them for dramatic effect so-2-speak, but i hope i dont worry anyone. on the other hand thi"
Posted by HattoriHanzo on "The Predator" by HattoriHanzo
- "thx shards. i was try to get a broken-rhyme sound and thats why it doesnt flow well. sort of experimenting cuz i get sick of making easy-listening rhymes. kno wut i mean? thx 4 your comments."
Posted by HattoriHanzo on "Broken" by HattoriHanzo
- "thx alot tania and drea. i originally thought this sounded over-the-top, but this poem describes exactly what i envisioned doing to the prosecutor... to me its just a fun fantasy - not too deep of a poem or anything"
Posted by HattoriHanzo on "Ice Princess" by HattoriHanzo
- "this was one of the more popular poems people liked when i was in jail. i thought i'd get more feedback on this writing. oh well. :-) "
Posted by HattoriHanzo on "Ice Princess" by HattoriHanzo
