Bleed the Whore
By HattoriHanzo
If I could rape every girl who broke my heart...
If I could kill every cunt who broke my pride...
I'd take them down to hell with me in suicide.
A woman will always have that power over men
But we will rip you open as I have done to you
In my futile defense. . . my satisfaction.
I find pleasure in your beating as you do in prejiduce
So scream like a pig does squeal when I open you front and back.
I bleed the whore who has broken me once before.
Take my bloody wounds upon you.
Feel what it is that I feel but in the flesh
As that is how I take you, slipping beneath wet dress.
Look at me when I squeeze every last lingering breath
From your lungs, your last words wimperred until none is left.
Quiver beneath me. . . pressed hard against you
Laid out like a lump of laundry spread neatly.
This is how I like you to look. . . mouth gaping
Frozen as if you were in mid "NO" but so silent a scream.
Eyes wide like looking up at the last thing you ever saw -
My every muscle and tendon tight and tense as rope twisted to the cleat.
As I held you down with every ounce of pulsating hate
I had in my little 150 pound body
I felt you go limp in my hands. . . my little rag doll.
Clouded gaze, your eyes roll off. . . almost casual.
I will sleep with you until your rigor sets
It's all you were good for in life my dear
And until you become cold...
It's all you're good for in death...
Comments on "Bleed the Whore"
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On Saturday, March 24, 2007, mysterylove
(97) wrote:
i've got to go with deadrosesdust on this one but yeah good write; i'd be damned if it was me ;P
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On Tuesday, March 13, 2007, HattoriHanzo
(21) wrote:
thx for you comments. im not as violent as i write, in fact im extremely passive and non-violent, but i have fun writing subject matter that sort of boils up from an alter-ego :-)
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On Tuesday, March 13, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
If we were all as violent as we write, most of us would be in prison. lol :)
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On Tuesday, March 13, 2007, Sin
(1135) wrote:
not me...im all sweetness and love :P
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On Tuesday, March 13, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
Well duh!! sugar isn't even as sweet as you...except those days you wear the horn and tails. but who's counting those days. heheh :oP
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A former member wrote:
you're gonna hate this,but i must say that a lot of girls are the way they are b/c of men. I loved your poem though if it makes sense at all for me to say now
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On Monday, March 12, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
very raw, emotional. I love how you express it, but yes in someway disturbing, though that makes great poetry.
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On Monday, March 12, 2007, Sin
(1135) wrote:
this was somewhat disturbing...you have some anger issues dont you?..all kidding aside, this was very eye for an eye in a morbidly twisted sexual way..
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A former member wrote:
Wow, Id hate to be the bitch that pushed you to write this. The beginning was great and the whole thing was so cut throat and full of emotion. Awesome write.
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On Monday, March 12, 2007, Dissolving Poet
(560) wrote:
I like it the hostility is beautiful, I loved how you had a flow going with it. You should go over it and correct the spelling errors and such, but besides that its dripping with acid that I put my tongue under waiting happily for the next drop