Comments by LOKI
- "Being a father myself I relate to this well.It gave me chills to read it.A fathers love is a fathers love.You expressed that better than Ive been able to when I have tried.I might have to fav this one"
Posted by LOKI on "In the Meter of Her Life" by Alchemist
- "It does have an overwelming wisdom to it.Some one called me a young old man once.I would say you fit the mold better than I do after reading this.Searching every where for beauty except with in herself.Loved the story and the way yo conveyed it.NICE"
Posted by LOKI on "Metamorphosis" by Alchemist
- "This is really clever.Its a rise and fall of emotions.Its Happy sad mad angry even funny.Really liked the chunky sluts line.It made me laugh.I gonna fave this one"
Posted by LOKI on "Disgustingly Beautiful" by Alchemist
- "excelent write.I can definitly relate to this.The south is beautiful in the summer.By the way is the humidity in South Carolina as bad as it is in Tennessee"
Posted by LOKI on "Southern Summers" by Alchemist
- "Damn you have a way to portray raw emotions with words.I really enjoyed this.Its raw its truthful.No holding back.Awsome."
Posted by LOKI on "Don't Bless" by Alchemist
- "man you were right.Im glad I read this.You portray the power of addiction very well and very unique.Very nice write."
Posted by LOKI on "Addiction" by Alchemist
