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Comments by carlosjackal

"A brilliant classical rhyming piece on the loose tongue and the mind attached."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Shush" by LIFEINVADER

"Perfectly executed rhyme scheme for these sad and somber words. Very well crafted."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Discarded" by LIFEINVADER

"So much packed into one of the tightest of forms, thus feels way more than 17 syllables. Brilliant stuff."
Posted by carlosjackal on "The plunge" by LIFEINVADER

"There’s a beautiful complexity to these words that makes the entire piece from start to finish wonderfully absorbing. You share the same Birthday as my sister and I’m also a single-digit September baby (5th to be exact :)) so here’s to us Virgos! "
Posted by carlosjackal on "September 2" by LIFEINVADER

"Really like this optimistic view on death and the use of the whispers in the pines image. Good stuff :)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Whispers in the Pine" by LIFEINVADER

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