Comments by carlosjackal
- "Powerful, brilliant wordage..."And she woke in derelict dreams" Sublime stuff and a super last line. Love it!! -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Monochrome Moods" by Tania
- "There not much I can add to everyone else's comments apart from this was fantastic. Honest, great choice of words and excellent flow and form - Top draw stuff!"
Posted by carlosjackal on ".... Sorry" by Tania
- "The brevity of this was fantastic..and the language and strict form wre great..write the hell on, Tania.."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Leave me ..." by Tania
