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Leave me ...
By Tania
Tell me shattered heart..
where do i now go?
You leave me in this abandoned wilderness
where only the wildest flowers grow
Tell me shattered heart..
what thoughts remain unsaid?
you leave me in a forgotton kingdom
where knights dare not to tread
Leave me shattered heart..
may you wilt and wane away
Let me bask in my emotions
let me live another day...
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© 2007 Tania
Published on Sunday, January 28, 2007.
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A former member wrote:
a beautiful piece of poetry
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On Thursday, July 7, 2011, Nameless Pariah
(126)
wrote:
I agree that this very well could be sung as lyrics to a song. It was fantastic. I like the metaphor you used. :)
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A former member wrote:
I could sing it as a kind of blues... thank you!
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On Thursday, March 8, 2007, BeautifullyRuined
(94) wrote:
Short but sweet I really liked this.
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On Tuesday, March 6, 2007, Imsosickxxx
(80) wrote:
I love how you writing is so simple but the underlying emotions are so strong. Beautiful write!
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On Monday, February 12, 2007, carlosjackal
(3012) wrote:
The brevity of this was fantastic..and the language and strict form wre great..write the hell on, Tania..
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On Sunday, February 11, 2007, jack paper
(126) wrote:
satisfying every time i read...
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On Friday, February 9, 2007, LOKI
(164) wrote:
Yes this was nice.Nice way to display the feeling of abandonment
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On Tuesday, February 6, 2007, Drea
(1443) wrote:
I liked this. Welcome to DP.
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On Wednesday, February 7, 2007, Tania
(197) wrote:
Thank you Drea x
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A former member wrote:
Had a very classic tone throughout."where only the wildest flowers grow" this line lingers with me. I love the ability you have to convey so much without over writing. Very richly beautiful..Jess
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On Wednesday, February 7, 2007, Tania
(197) wrote:
Thanks jess..i really like your style too x
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On Sunday, February 4, 2007, jack paper
(126) wrote:
simple and intriguing... nice very nice
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On Monday, January 29, 2007, Sealed Identity
(31) wrote:
good write!
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On Monday, January 29, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
fuck this was amazing, i love your vocabulary and you tied questions and structure well in this piece, fantastic!
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On Sunday, January 28, 2007, Aunty Depressant
(434) wrote:
thoughtful and touching, with a pinch of fantasy.
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A former member wrote:
simple yet deep and profound... Nice.
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