loves choke/hold

By Tania

Restless. Savage looks
pinned on trembling eyes.
I bite my lip to relax
As you slowly stroke
My neck again..

and I’m calm..

I’m just not breathing.

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Published on Sunday, July 1, 2007. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "loves choke/hold"

On Sunday, August 26, 2007, Sketso (416) wrote:

calm, just not breathing... wow.
On Tuesday, August 14, 2007, BeautifullyRuined (93) wrote:

This was fantabulous.Short and wonderful.
On Monday, July 16, 2007, jack paper (121) wrote:

short but intense and edgy... very nice Tania!
On Thursday, July 12, 2007, asphyxia (56) wrote:

DEAR BEUTIFUL thank you, tania, for the props on my last one!! =)
On Thursday, July 12, 2007, asphyxia (56) wrote:

it woulda been way more awesome of a comment if i spelt beautiful right the first time... lol.
On Thursday, July 5, 2007, asphyxia (56) wrote:

hehe, what a way to be!
On Tuesday, July 3, 2007, Bella Butchery (696) wrote:

Fresh and clean like a mandolin set of lips, you speak begged truths and heart felt honesty.
On Monday, July 2, 2007, Mylissa (825) wrote:

wow this is so intense, insane. I love love and love!! You're so beautiful...
A former member wrote: suspenseful and taut; a lover's tightropestrangleforbreath kind of write.
On Monday, July 2, 2007, prettydisgrace (93) wrote:

&hearts; i love you :P
On Sunday, July 1, 2007, Moonflower (298) wrote:

yeah i agree... those two last lines set the poem. love it.
A former member wrote: "and I'm calm..I'm just not breathing." Those two lines, said everything. So short, but oooooh, so beautiful. Excellent. ~*Beth*~
On Sunday, July 1, 2007, carlosjackal (2788) wrote:

=) -Carl
A former member wrote: funny, I was just thinking of you this morning and lo and behold, you have posted another tasty treat for me to enjoy :) This is intense!
On Sunday, July 1, 2007, Army Barbie (316) wrote:

Oh so simple
On Sunday, July 1, 2007, Tania (192) wrote:

i know. im in a simple mood today :)