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loves choke/hold
By Tania
Restless. Savage looks
pinned on trembling eyes.
I bite my lip to relax
As you slowly stroke
My neck again..
and I’m calm..
I’m just not breathing.
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© 2007 Tania
Published on Sunday, July 1, 2007.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, August 26, 2007, Sketso
(435)
wrote:
calm, just not breathing... wow.
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On Tuesday, August 14, 2007, BeautifullyRuined
(94) wrote:
This was fantabulous.Short and wonderful.
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On Monday, July 16, 2007, jack paper
(126) wrote:
short but intense and edgy... very nice Tania!
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On Thursday, July 12, 2007, asphyxia
(58) wrote:
DEAR BEUTIFUL thank you, tania, for the props on my last one!! =)
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On Thursday, July 12, 2007, asphyxia
(58) wrote:
it woulda been way more awesome of a comment if i spelt beautiful right the first time... lol.
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On Thursday, July 5, 2007, asphyxia
(58) wrote:
hehe, what a way to be!
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On Tuesday, July 3, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
Fresh and clean like a mandolin set of lips, you speak begged truths and heart felt honesty.
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On Monday, July 2, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
wow this is so intense, insane. I love love and love!! You're so beautiful...
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A former member wrote:
suspenseful and taut; a lover's tightropestrangleforbreath kind of write.
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On Monday, July 2, 2007, prettydisgrace
(96) wrote:
♥ i love you :P
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On Sunday, July 1, 2007, Moonflower
(301) wrote:
yeah i agree... those two last lines set the poem. love it.
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A former member wrote:
"and I'm calm..I'm just not breathing." Those two lines, said everything. So short, but oooooh, so beautiful. Excellent. ~*Beth*~
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On Sunday, July 1, 2007, carlosjackal
(3011) wrote:
=) -Carl
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A former member wrote:
funny, I was just thinking of you this morning and lo and behold, you have posted another tasty treat for me to enjoy :) This is intense!
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On Sunday, July 1, 2007, Army Barbie
(324) wrote:
Oh so simple
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On Sunday, July 1, 2007, Tania
(197) wrote:
i know. im in a simple mood today :)
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