Comments by carlosjackal
- "Superb word etching. But then I wouldn't expect anything less from your pen. I hope you're still writing given all your many amazing adventures you've been on since you wrote this piece."
Posted by carlosjackal on "chartreuse and cigarettes" by verablue
- "This snapshot...Fuck, just expressed so well. Yeah, you captured that feeling we try to deny..That sometimes the place we've chosen as home isn't what it is when the rose-tinted glasses are taken off. "
Posted by carlosjackal on "sketched.skyscrapehigh.wastelands" by verablue
- "The mix of bittersweet emotions and images that fly by at the speed of lust and desire rushing for that almighty collision into bursting orgasm. Yeah, I guess you could say me likes this one a lot :) -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "lust for lust in slot #6" by verablue
- "I've read this twice now, and every line is stunning in its own right and as one this had me in mind of a month-long club-fest, the aftermath of nothingness begging the question, "What did happen?" Top draw write. -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "sys[tem]crash-coma" by verablue
- ""bleeds beauty" not melody!! I feel bad for misquoting. Ah, well, I might as well add another of my faves from this masterpiece.."Cyber-genetic routine tall tales scraping up to the skies""
Posted by carlosjackal on ".empty.bottle.amarone.nights." by verablue
- "This has to be up there as one of your best, Bazil. "Even tragedy bleeds melody through that wicked melody".."I sweep up the splinters and lock the doors".."tangled blue hair and canvas skin"...Just a few of the lines I adored. "
Posted by carlosjackal on ".empty.bottle.amarone.nights." by verablue
- "..and so do I..brilliantly crafted, this was succinct dark art poetry at its best. :)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "more." by verablue
- "*taken aback* There was something so morbid and twisted about this and at the same time blurred like a memory out of focus or a story with details missing so as to leave the dear reader in confusion...Brilliant as ever, Bazil :))))"
Posted by carlosjackal on "tarnished/tragic/travesty" by verablue
- "That's so cool that someone who inspires you to such a great extent has become a good friend..I suppose my girlfriend Sara is my great inspiration..without her I wouldn't be writing the stuff I do, though she probably doesn't know it! "
Posted by carlosjackal on "terminal blue" by verablue
- ""verablue"..and thus your username is explained!! Great piece..sounds like you feel indebted to the song and/or the bands work as a whole particularly the lyrics..or else I'm reading WAY too much into things :)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "terminal blue" by verablue
- "I would quote some lines and explain my thoughts on them but that would take too many comment boxes of 256 words..All I can add is I hope you start posting more regularly again..You're ace, Bazil!"
Posted by carlosjackal on "seven days for seven years erased" by verablue
- "Your mojo is definitely in orbit, Bazil! This was such a tragic write yet beautifully conveyed with your pin-perfect placing of words and gradual build up to that pay off line that always leaves you in thought."
Posted by carlosjackal on "seven days for seven years erased" by verablue
- "Fantastic comeback..this was like an offbeat Sci-Fi, drugged-up lullaby..not one word was out of place. I hope this becomes the spur to break the writer's block..we've all missed your regular postings..Write on, Bazil :)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "silicone silence" by verablue
- ""You belong here/Deep red inside me" This was like taking the situation of tea for two but subverting it beyond all recognition and making it something all the more glorious."
Posted by carlosjackal on "we're out of coffee..." by verablue
