Comments by carlosjackal

  • "This flowed like blood with an excellent message and is brilliantly absorbing. Very well done. "
    Posted by carlosjackal on "The Art of War" by LOKI
  • "I have to agree with everyone else on this - the message is so simple and powerful it really strikes out especially because you don't waste one word in this piece and you haven't overcooked it by thinking it might be 2 short and have to add extra stanzas."
    Posted by carlosjackal on "First They Bleed" by LOKI
  • "A fantastic poem. I would only change the last line as I believe you're likely to be remembered for being yourself than hiding behind a mask."
    Posted by carlosjackal on "Slow Motion In A Dream" by LOKI
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