Comments by Johny_D_Lewis
- "*you were an inspiration, a dream and a rare beauty, now you're a fear, a cry, and just so damn ugly*, that's how i would write the second verse, i like it how it is thought so up to you"
Posted by Johny_D_Lewis on "What you were" by Adam
- "nice, i love the lil twists and turns, nut God is capital G when meaning the one true God, if that matters to you or not, keep up the good work"
Posted by Johny_D_Lewis on "Submissive to you *" by Adam
- "stuck in the rain or maybe better stuck out in the rain, feeling the nakedness of your emotions, i like the rareness of your emotion, use it in more of your writes"
Posted by Johny_D_Lewis on "Hidden From This World" by Adam
