Comments by The Zebra Warrior

"crazy stream of conscious esque poem woith all manner of rattling details, and deaths, the theatrical ponderings and punctuatings, this works like a parody with a burlesque-like quality - strange, modernistic ravings of a deranged mind; yet there's so much more tucked in there...also very original and much different than your average DP post....spectacular language and presentation, I really enjoyed reading something like this today...well done Mr.Cloud :D"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Widow Mandolin Fur" by Bella Butchery

"reading this I think....pretty stylish - but the "fuck you" part doesn't feel like it belongs, it's too abrupt and obvious (like everyone's a tough son of a gun these days) - soft and strange rhyme for you, helps it as a song feel though - brief. I liked it...."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Spray Paint Butterflies and Grey Matter Calligraphy" by Bella Butchery

"this again is a re-post surely? Or a revised edition? Anyhoops, that's neither here nor there...it's effing graggly wicked that's what it is sunshine"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Passion Murder Mask... She Walks With Axe in Hand Tonight" by Bella Butchery

"this is what you do best...forget the inanities in the chatbox...this is where you shine, bring your charisma to the punch and sowcase some grit and emotion; feeling.....excellent, timeless feel...love it"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Velvet Sunrise In The Mist Of a Sailors Dream" by Bella Butchery

"like delirium tremens in my head...art trance dancing...avant garde-esque with a simle but unique spirit....excellently fused with an original poise Mr.Cloud...nice one"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Lying In Between The Sheets" by Bella Butchery

"this made me laugh and nod my head and probably be in awe all in one go...it leaps off the stage like a dernaged aktorr...kind of kamikaze poetry that's actually hard to define....you are a crazy ass and I love it!! "
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Blue Methadone Cosmo... An Artist On Stage..." by Bella Butchery

"reading this freefall was explicit in all its glorious every last drop of word exalted into a higher dimensional experience...a little like Jim Carroll, I was purely blown away by the feel of this....absolutely unbelievable!!!!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "sex with a bullet proof vest on" by Bella Butchery

"rattlesnake bitings....this snakes its manner into the veins....live and let live; it resonates because of its mixture of passion and pathos....not my personal fav but still enjoyed "
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "blackhaired beauty" by Bella Butchery

"I'll have what Cloud is having....la restaurant da fantisque...ahhhhhh!!!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Un Embrasser Au Cemetary, Ma Petite étoile" by Bella Butchery

"my god man....what a seductive ohlalala....oh hell yeah; this is Decadents dancing moonlight razorlips....ahhhh, what can be said...let this poem juts dance magic that should exist once in everyone's lifetime.....truly incredible incrediblio increducitio."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Un Embrasser Au Cemetary, Ma Petite étoile" by Bella Butchery

"I love the catharsis dance of this; richly vibrant, great colour and content, a rollerocaster trip and the excitement of your words did their magic...yes sir!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "A Portrait, The Way Zombies Lovers Embrace" by Bella Butchery