Comments by Frater Synth
- "Not really sure what to say other than , Fuck Yea that was awesome. makes me think about the song Call upon your Gods by Dark Lotus "
Posted by Frater Synth on "Outcast" by Legions Slave
- "I love the the way you sneak in the feelings of unwantedness and lonelyness. the only thing I didn't like was the formatting. sometimes line breaks are your best friend they force your readers stop briefly and as they do they dwell on the thoughts and imagery presented to them. you may not realize it but you can actually say a lot more just by adding a few line breaks. "
Posted by Frater Synth on "Dreams Of Death" by Legions Slave
- "I think you just proved Edgar Allan Poe wrong. he made a clear statement in his writing "The Poetic Principle" where he said "A vary short poem,while now and then producing a brilliant or vivid, never produces a profound or enduring, effect." But i will tell you right now This will stick deep within my Soul for years to come. Amazing job evoking the emotional response of the reader as you describe the soul crushing weight of depression. "
Posted by Frater Synth on "Nightmares" by Legions Slave
