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"Thanks a bunches for the read, Iâ€™m glad you liked that line. I sure hope we donâ€™t know the same guy, I wouldnâ€™t want to put you through that, lol"
Posted by Candy Cain on "Sweet tooth silhouette, the apple of my ire." by Candy Cain

"Reminds me of someone. We mayvknow the same guy haha jk. " yet you couldn't make it one day. showed up about as predictable. as the sweet talk that you spew." Love that bit. Xox"
Posted by Chelsey Elaine on "Sweet tooth silhouette, the apple of my ire." by Candy Cain

"Flattery wont win you any brownie points but itâ€™s always welcome. Thanks for the read."
Posted by Candy Cain on "A couple bars (of broken bottles.)" by Candy Cain

"This poem was a surprise to read. But a beautiful, painfully honest surprise. The direction it took was not what I expected from the title, but the construction was swift and the imagery evocative. The self fulfilling prophecy at the end was deep, tragic insight that leaves a realistic fatalism to the beauty of the piece. Exquisite."
Posted by Unknown on "A couple bars (of broken bottles.)" by Candy Cain

"Nicely written with a great flow. Great ink"
Posted by Unknown on "Atop the Land of Diamonds/To Sink or not to Swim" by Candy Cain

"I love all three above mentioned! Never give up on dreams or fantasies...they keep hope alive"
Posted by natalie on "the prince and the pretense" by Candy Cain

"Keep on Writing....let your emotions be the fuel for your pen...and read a lot of the poets here to get ideas."
Posted by natalie on "Atop the Land of Diamonds/To Sink or not to Swim" by Candy Cain

"The imagery I get is of so done confused and a bit scared unsure of what to do next as the outcome of the action could be devastating."
Posted by natalie on "Atop the Land of Diamonds/To Sink or not to Swim" by Candy Cain

"Mm, thank you again for the your supportive words this time. "
Posted by Candy Cain on "Atop the Land of Diamonds/To Sink or not to Swim" by Candy Cain

"Sometimes certain situations and emotions can be hard to put into words or expressed . I feel this is one of those moments that o e cannot relate to until it slaps you in the face . Don't worry about changing it for then it is not original . Leave it as is and go to your next poem . And along the way you will get better at expressing those deep ingrained emotions that cause us to write poetry ."
Posted by midnights voice on "Atop the Land of Diamonds/To Sink or not to Swim" by Candy Cain

"Oh, thank you for the honest feedback. You're very good at reading the intents I put into things and I appreciate that. Would you suggest I change anything to make the imagery more relatable? Despite the tone of the words, it was actually written to a fast pace, cheery, campfire tune in major, which may have affected it this way."
Posted by Candy Cain on "Atop the Land of Diamonds/To Sink or not to Swim" by Candy Cain

"Many images that are hard for the reader to relate to though they can be easily visualized . This is one that the reader would have to had been there to appreciate . But the feeling of mentalking exhaustion comes through loud and clear . Would have like to hear the music too ."
Posted by midnights voice on "Atop the Land of Diamonds/To Sink or not to Swim" by Candy Cain

"Awfully good this was! - BFP "
Posted by Bornfrompain on "Untitled Wave" by Candy Cain

"Very cool..I have read a couple of these before...this was good."
Posted by natalie on "Untitled Wave" by Candy Cain

"Very interesting and clever indeed. THIS is not awful ;)"
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Untitled Wave" by Candy Cain

"I think you should keep this posted. I agree with the previous commenters, very clever. "
Posted by spikedwithLUST on "Untitled Wave" by Candy Cain

"The symmetry of this was pretty cool. That can be tough to pull off so nice job :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "Untitled Wave" by Candy Cain

"I like it though. It's very clever and I love how you tear it down to build back onto it in a different way. I enjoyed this. "
Posted by Unknown on "Untitled Wave" by Candy Cain

"My first read of yours and I must say you made me a fan!!! Well done!! - BFP "
Posted by Bornfrompain on "I'm now going to poorly narrate a long winded dream losing steam" by Candy Cain

"I'm left wondering if I can find away to live inside this piece. I much enjoyed reading this aloud and letting your scape roll off my tongue... Hm, that sounded a bit dirty. Anyways, I fucking LOVE UNICORNS! ...I think I'm done here. -TGðŸ’‹ "
Posted by soul_versing on "the prince and the pretense" by Candy Cain

"Something whimsical to put together like a jigsaw puzzle on love . Vains or veins , through both flow life's blood to the heart . And "under pressure's less depressed" is a gem ."
Posted by midnights voice on "the prince and the pretense" by Candy Cain

"I don't disagree, but you must let me brood from time to time. Dork. Lovely as always. "
Posted by CausticChlorine on "the prince and the pretense" by Candy Cain

"lovely play off of Caustic's piece. good job."
Posted by Cassette on "the prince and the pretense" by Candy Cain

"Wonderful tribute!!! - BFP "
Posted by Bornfrompain on "the prince and the pretense" by Candy Cain

"Interesting juxtaposition of show and know CC. Momma can always give the best advice I'd guess. Cheers and thanks for the mental gymnastics - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "just things i think i think. (my gemini poker match)" by Candy Cain

"You're kind. thank you for the comments you left. i appreciate the words."
Posted by Candy Cain on "just things i think i think. (my gemini poker match)" by Candy Cain

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