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"chatter, chatter in the night we have come to watch you die oh, how it screamed its excellence"
Posted by Unknown on "Whisper, whisper, in the night...." by torn_beauty

"i'm not exactly sure what to say..but i felt this..it was great.."
Posted by Unknown on "...and it was beautiful." by torn_beauty

"At the start of every stanza... I could feel it. I could barely finish it. Tear Filled Eyes. Breathtaking, honestly. (brandon)"
Posted by ashottothetemple on "To excite my addiction" by torn_beauty

"jesus this was simply amazing and beautiful. ~ hdb."
Posted by Unknown on "To excite my addiction" by torn_beauty

"you have taught a tender and love filled lesson........"
Posted by urbanhumility on "Lavender kisses" by torn_beauty

"Wow. This actually made me cry. So touching. What a story to be told. What a trip it must be inside of your mind."
Posted by Err0r on "Lavender kisses" by torn_beauty

"I'm not a high and mighty critic but I love this! It makes sense and rhymes unlike a lot I've seen. An instant favorite for me :)"
Posted by Unknown on "The art of standing alone" by torn_beauty

"this is brilliant! yupyup. you.. get a cookie! =) ~b"
Posted by blue on "The art of standing alone" by torn_beauty

"i really enjoyed this...so obviously personal, but,plenty of room to personally apply. 'she','her',yes yes...one of the same qualities i enjoy in a good song. i supposed i could agree with previous comments in a way,but,'plain' isn't always a bad thing. "
Posted by Unknown on "The art of standing alone" by torn_beauty

"Enjoyed this write very much. Yeah, the mirrors concept was wicked like Colin said, and I actually liked the rhymes. -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "The art of standing alone" by torn_beauty

"I'd say honestly the rhyme is plain, but the 'decadent hall of mirrors' concept was deadly deep dark...just maybe the rest of the poem was a touch typical...still I liked that part"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "The art of standing alone" by torn_beauty

"The endless use of euphemistic light and shade gives this piece a haunting atmosphere! Great Write! \Billy/"
Posted by Spiral Downward on "the scent of smothered blossoms." by torn_beauty

"the title drew me in quickly and i was so impressed by what followed. i loved this write."
Posted by dying angel on "the scent of smothered blossoms." by torn_beauty

"Melancholy and well written. I liked it."
Posted by soul dancer on "the scent of smothered blossoms." by torn_beauty

"there's beautiful sadness about this -which is strangely comforting -loved the line 'sitting on a bed that knows you too well'."
Posted by Unknown on "the scent of smothered blossoms." by torn_beauty

"It's sad, abandoned dreams lead to seemingless endless tomorrows, "
Posted by BoldSolitude on "where do we go now?" by torn_beauty

"I really liked the analogy of the ice being a perilous sea, never quite thought of it like that, i also liked the Silence was my partner, it really portrays a sense of loneliness"
Posted by BoldSolitude on "...and it was beautiful." by torn_beauty

"why thank you all but i think beautiful or something would be appropriate. fabulous."
Posted by torn_beauty on "...and it was beautiful." by torn_beauty

"as for your title dilema, I suggest taking your favorite line from the piece and shortening it into a title...such as..."Empty Hurts and Tangled Limbs" or something to that effect. "
Posted by Unknown on "...and it was beautiful." by torn_beauty

""my empty hurt kept me tangled somehow." Goodness, this piece is filled with gorgeous imagery and lullabyes one can only hear when whispered across the breeze...beautifully done. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "...and it was beautiful." by torn_beauty

"nice poem...you used the word beautiful 3 times so i guess naming it something beautiful would be appropriate...-l-"
Posted by Spiritus_Frumenti on "...and it was beautiful." by torn_beauty

"Excellent work. My ego would love to absolve your dilema. Unfortunately, I can not find a common theme to bind it all. So, you, being the writer and the holder of its meaning, must name it. Beautiful."
Posted by LordBrosnian on "...and it was beautiful." by torn_beauty

"i am in awe..."
Posted by anakronistik_me on "...and it was beautiful." by torn_beauty

"Deep and thought provoking write. The imagery stood out beautiful. Wonderful write."
Posted by K_Love on "Strange how that sounds" by torn_beauty

"I love the imagery and the meaning here, nice work"
Posted by monalisamarie on "Strange how that sounds" by torn_beauty

"I agree with this. Every dream has to die. ~Silver~"
Posted by Unknown on "all dreams soon die" by torn_beauty

"An endless twirling and swirling of colors and music. I really, really liked this piece. "
Posted by Unknown on "With glasses and Masquarade masks." by torn_beauty

" almost better to go insane than fear sleep and the memories it awakes Thank you for a look at the demons "
Posted by Father_Faust on "Whisper, whisper, in the night...." by torn_beauty

"Awesome work you've done, but what's so sad is how true this is."
Posted by VenomPlease on "all dreams soon die" by torn_beauty

"Amazing write. It only further confirms what I've always known was the truth"
Posted by VenomPlease on "Losing what's already lost" by torn_beauty

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