Comments by All Members
- "The opening bit was quite good. Excellent imagery. Painted a vivid scene of a smith plunging his new forged creation into the water bath."
Posted by Unknown on "Finding Imagination" by steuss
- "You created the most enchanting and beautiful images in this write beautifully woven words made for a great read:)"
Posted by italianbella on "Clouded Mind" by steuss
- "with fingertip sensitivity ... we find the words within the paper... ..my strange perception perhaps. i really enjoyed this."
Posted by elisa on "Finding Imagination" by steuss
- "such a placid calmness slides through this work. .. a wonder of form of formality combined; illustrating the curves of such instantaneous split second observations. .. .gorgeous this~"
Posted by Unknown on "Sunlight and Blankets" by steuss
- ""a dome of choice"; rapturously observant. .. as if we could shatter the illusion of what we are. .. . powerful and concrete images. . .. [where are the comments?]"
Posted by Unknown on "Shelter" by steuss
- "My favorite malady. Not remembering the premonition until the event is passed. Good stuff."
Posted by Unknown on "Slighter Sights" by steuss
- "I thoroughly enjoy the trend of elementalism in your words. I hate the cold myself but you make chill open space seem appealing."
Posted by Unknown on "Echos in Me" by steuss
- "excellent to see you post again; love the reverberations in this piece. . .nearly transcendental in its meditations. .. . breathy quaality .. . ness"
Posted by Unknown on "Echos in Me" by steuss
- "Ahh.. siu lim tao, the little idea, little glimpes into what is of itself so. It's the little things that keep waking us up. =) ~b"
Posted by blue on "Slighter Sights" by steuss
- "oO this screamed frustration..the mundane day to day of our compartmentalized lives chipping slowly away at sanity..and that ending was just perfect ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Shuddering Existance" by steuss
- "I like this alot. < Honestly thats not a true comment. I can't stand people who comment like that or, just say shit to cover a comment space. Comment like you mean it bitches !! ][ ]["
Posted by Unknown on "Winter's Choir in Summer's End" by steuss
- "It took me a while to figure this out, but you captured the essence of what this poem is. the realization that we are a sum of everything, and wondering if that revelation will last... i think..."
Posted by steuss on "New Scars Remembered" by steuss
- "reflective and strong, this is potent...illuminating such shadows of such things...embarking upon future, with holds to a past, and realising everlasting moments of presence...yet, disbleif [of] ...if it shall last..."
Posted by AniDayz on "New Scars Remembered" by steuss
- "...it all just hits, me, subtle and strongly...like ia m looking into the clouds if a reflection...of foreignity, like saying your name over and over in your head, till theres no connection at all to yourself and the name..."
Posted by AniDayz on "New Scars Remembered" by steuss
- "'melding they merge with what i thought , and what i now think, and what ive become i'm staring at myself...',"
Posted by AniDayz on "New Scars Remembered" by steuss
- ",' i feel the twist of my old self trying to shatter the glass...','i'm no longer NOW ,but All...will i Last in this vein?...'rings such echoes of broken bells inside of me, broken,yet .[w]hole..."
Posted by AniDayz on "New Scars Remembered" by steuss
- "ohhhh...still, i taste this on my tongue,as before, though, today....within my shadow of grey sun fallen day...this just...just melts in my mouth. ... *revert[s] back to this again.+again+again...*"
Posted by AniDayz on "Clouded Mind" by steuss
- "absolutely amasing...speaks such truth,in such a way, crawling over my skin like a caterpillar, blessed with wings...but forgot, such wings...are upon its back. i can not tell you,the weight of my respect and awareness of this piece. thankyou.*"
Posted by AniDayz on "Memories of Autumn" by steuss
- "...a little green". .reminiscent of a mitchell song i know.. youve captured the silent prisoners well. divinely creative portrait of 'falling' per se"
Posted by Unknown on "Memories of Autumn" by steuss
- "Reflective. Will give me a whole new dimension when I walk out into the yard littered with the skeletal remnants crushing beneath my feet. ~ mw"
Posted by manywalks on "Memories of Autumn" by steuss
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