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- "…I sense something deeply dire here. I keep coming back to this, and can’t quite shake this feeling… that something immense is moving, heaving behind these words, unseen yet piercingly felt, something dangerous, something deadly. Despite the uplifting of the final line, this weighs so heavily upon me. So heavily. My will to protect is growling, viciously. ~b"
Posted by blue on "xvi: Hex" by Feral
- "Holy fuck..” Fully present and inhabiting this mind, this body -
the sheer fucking love and glory of being alive
at its most primal,
most vulnerable.
Most precious.”..That stanza alone was a poem in its own right..Your roar is amazing."
Posted by carlosjackal on "xvi: Hex" by Feral
- "Captures the on-point premise of life being this unknown and powerful force that can help us overcome even the greatest challenges by tearing things apart and creating anew, in my opinion anyhow... A quality write indeed. Cheers."
Posted by LIFEINVADER on "xvi: Hex" by Feral
- "so I was laying awake last night thinking what I said didn't make sense ... too hastily formed, it's not the time , it's instantaneous, that blinding flash of hindsight or insight. One is left beautiful , fragile , awe-inspiring ..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "ix: Albatross " by Feral
- "I don’t know why, but this is making me want to call up taoist quotes. Well, I do know why, but that is beside the point. My point is this, lady: this write, your language, this way of expressly constructing ideas (yes, I nabbed it…well sort of) is so uniquely yours… knowing you, it probably has an elemental signature that stands out in the ultra violet spectrum. Stop being so damn clever. “…a resonate form opens” …the last three stanzas really pull this together. Now' fulgurite… that’s curious to be sure; can’t quite figure on what is the key element here, the sand, the lightning or the glass. Curious, very curious. ~b"
Posted by blue on "ix: Albatross " by Feral
- "this struck me as enlightening and mysterious , as though on the precipice of a great epiphany and a daunting void.It's going to take some time to bloom into stone without the catalyst. Missed you ... precious"
Posted by kinkifrog on "ix: Albatross " by Feral
- "The concept that embracing uncertainty can lead to a more profound and significant form of existence is a remarkable notion."
Posted by LIFEINVADER on "ix: Albatross " by Feral
- "It absolutely is, in every Rilkean sense of the word. Thank you, my friend. "
Posted by Feral on "ix: Albatross " by Feral
- "A great poem that deserves more than one read. Thank you for sharing, I will be back to read this again. "
Posted by SolApathy on "ix: Albatross " by Feral
- "…I have to come back to this to make a proper comment…for right now, all I can manage is thank you, so much, for writing this…"
Posted by SilentStalker on "ix: Albatross " by Feral
- "…well. Where can one ever begin? There is always a sudden severity to your writing, whether toward the darkness or light, it is always there, this… immediate and intentional incisiveness. “…scarlet and viscus, slithering in the sand at my feet”. To command the readers attention so forcefully, so completely… it’s quite brilliant, you rascal. evocation, of course, of course… always love your titles, so clever. Moreover, your writes have an elliptical quality for me, like a slow burning star caught in the orbit of an ultra dense black hole. Orbiting, orbiting. Pondering, pondering. Evocations, indeed. That last stanza and closing line…incomparable. “that place of mythic transition…” you slay me, every time. Much love and respect. ~b"
Posted by blue on "xviii: evocation" by Feral
- "Most meaningful changes start from within, transformation is not easy, and releasing, even harder. Cheers."
Posted by LIFEINVADER on "xviii: evocation" by Feral
- "…this right here…speaks to me on levels that still hurt to talk about…this reminds me of the hungers, the never enoughs, the self-loathings and the dark places that we struggle to crawl out of, before they bury us completely…burn this out of me; I may not be strong enough to face this again and still be me…"
Posted by SilentStalker on "xviii: evocation" by Feral
- "...and the wounds that shadow our flight. Your writing is just so penetrating, like the immediacy of a dire or dangerous situation that amplifies the senses, focused and utterly affecting. As always, miss you. ~b"
Posted by blue on "a private mythology" by Feral
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