Comments by All Members

"nicely narrative but ringing with melancholy; ghostly, like a spirit looking to return to the earth and do 'mortal' things once more, such as love, despite the whispers of triviality....you have a knack for these themes, I enjoyed the way you connected the dots with the 1st to the last"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "There Are Women Upstairs" by NeroMatches

"Captivating piece...I can see a long story in these 3 stanzas...and as "for a cold town where there are no walls"...well that line took me places."
Posted by Narcissa on "There Are Women Upstairs" by NeroMatches

"Wow- this is stunningly sumptuous, amazing work"
Posted by Lylani on "Wandering Stars" by NeroMatches

"Most excellent imagery. Thanks for the opportunity to read this."
Posted by Unknown on "and this boy." by NeroMatches

""or would the beat of my heart bruise yours?"...Excellent piece :) "
Posted by carlosjackal on "and this boy." by NeroMatches

"colin! i missed you and your poetry, man. now if we could only drag a tetch into the picture then it could kinda be like the old days again."
Posted by NeroMatches on "and this boy." by NeroMatches

"ainsof! haha. and it's great to be back. thank you :)"
Posted by NeroMatches on "and this boy." by NeroMatches

"if only I could fave this...so much seeps thru the emotional to the vivid and back again; articulate as mentioned and imaginative. Love LOVE the sex as strychine/poison analogy. Fuckin hits hard here. Your 'misery' has lent itself to spellbinding poetry (and at such an 'early' age)...I suppose the one danger is that however fantastic the poeyry is, its little comfort, lest a cure, as exemplified by the closing line. Whoever you're struggling to 'love'/addressing here I reckon would be awe struck at such piercing elegiac ad visionary-like words. Pretty incredible nontheless Jules... sad, candid; braincandy brilliance"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "and this boy." by NeroMatches

"damn good to see you posting again... it's been far too long. an odd tale you tell.. a fair warning to the women in your world? I like this, some phrases really stand out... like the strychnine sex drip... that is positively lovely.... somethin to grind the ol molars on ;)"
Posted by Unknown on "and this boy." by NeroMatches

"..broken stardust and streetlamps.. love this. and also the last two lines were killer. *fav*"
Posted by Unknown on "and this boy." by NeroMatches

"a foward and intrinsic form of prose you write......darkly honest.....articulate........so very well written...................urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "and this boy." by NeroMatches

"procrastination guilt soaked with regret- (biting down on the bitter coffee bean)"
Posted by freudian-slip on "Stale Bread and Newspapers" by NeroMatches

"i feel really dramn to this poem, i must have read it like 10 times over. but each time i just find something else. its really lovely and beautifully structured "
Posted by Morbid_insanity on "Wandering Stars" by NeroMatches

"unfortunately opportunity only knocks once, and you have to acknowledge it. Great descriptions of sense in this piece, I could literally smell the coffee the whole way through it."
Posted by sole on "Stale Bread and Newspapers" by NeroMatches

""that same mouth in the morning which tastes of stale tobacco and bad wine" I love your descriptive layering, the red raw wrecked molested flowing energy of this poem. The rhythm in the tenth verse is extremely effective. You have captured the Polaroid universe of the city's hard, hard underbelly quite well. This is Daliesque & symphonic. Well done! "
Posted by Unknown on "This Dali Symphony" by NeroMatches

"I'm glad to have discovered you. Each section brought a vivid image to my mind's eye, and that to me is an important part of poetry. The visions it inspires... Your style is rather unique, and urges me to delve further into your work. Spot on poetry, I really enjoyed this."
Posted by Lynaes on "The Surreal Anachronism of Everyday Going Wrong" by NeroMatches

"oh wow! i loved this. tears were trying to fight their way out as i read this. i feel this. i can never write something this deep down, it's refreshing to be able to read it from another soul. "
Posted by Unknown on "The City Flowers" by NeroMatches

"yes yes heck yes; classic.. . timeless. . .and so inherently sadly purely voiced. .. "
Posted by Unknown on "Sinfonia # 1" by NeroMatches

"This was just so fucking amazing to me right now, one of the few things I've read lately which have been a blow to the heart. Thankyou."
Posted by Guillotine on "Wandering Stars" by NeroMatches

"Delicate and fragile - like snow-flakes on heart-strings..."
Posted by Winterwords on "Wandering Stars" by NeroMatches

"Excellent Write! That first section was great, especially the first three lines!"
Posted by Spiral Downward on "Romancing Violins" by NeroMatches

"that doesn't really need to be typed for eyes to say....it doesn't justify a comment either, but I often get indulged in controversy....trust you, good job you're a long way off....ya sod"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "The Surreal Anachronism of Everyday Going Wrong" by NeroMatches

"~definitely...ass-tapping isn't my only are of expertise ;P"
Posted by Rebel_not_Radical on "The Surreal Anachronism of Everyday Going Wrong" by NeroMatches

"I was thinking Kafka On The Shore...you are brain tapping again?"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "The Surreal Anachronism of Everyday Going Wrong" by NeroMatches

"~and i am singing "kafka on the shore~"...cool, you just stepped in the lines between holden caulfield and kafka tamura...so there's some summer romance? hahahaha"
Posted by Rebel_not_Radical on "The Surreal Anachronism of Everyday Going Wrong" by NeroMatches

"reminds me of magic realism....a certain deadpan offeat-ness....I would like to see this fleshed out more, maybe even become a story...indulged, I wanted to read more ya fucker..."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "The Surreal Anachronism of Everyday Going Wrong" by NeroMatches

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